Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Student Handbook (Compass) Argument

This Week: Argument Essay Writing
Monday 9/10 (in class)
Student Handbook Prewriting
Use the handout to plan your argument essay



Compass SAT-style Argument Essay Pre-writing
Type 2 Writing Assignment: Unit Work (Formative) Assessment
Complete this work by the beginning of class _________________________________

[] Choose a policy in the Student Handbook that you would like to respond to.
Quote the policy here:

[] Decide if you will argue in support of the policy, in opposition to the policy, or for a particular revision of the policy that you state clearly. In other words take a position; make a claim.

Write your position as a claim (or thesis) here:


[] Prepare supporting reasoning and examples for your position.
What reasoning and examples will you use to support your argument?
State four (4) reasons and examples.

1. State a reason that supports your claim.

State an example that supports that reasoning.

2. State a reason that supports your claim.

State an example that supports that reasoning.

3. State a reason that supports your claim.

State an example that supports that reasoning.

4. State a reason that supports your claim.

State an example that supports that reasoning.

[] Now consider the reasoning that someone arguing against your position and for a different position might use.
Give at least two examples of reasoning that someone arguing against your position and for a different position might use.

How could you respond to the reasoning stated above in a way that would help support your position?

[] What are your strongest two reasons and examples?

[] What order for those two reasons and examples would be most effective?


Monday (at home)
Finish pre-writing

Tuesday 9/11 (in class)
Bring your completed prewriting handout to class.
Take a look at the grading rubric and SAT-argument examples.
Write a draft of your essay (introduction presenting your position, at least two body paragraphs each with a supporting reason and well-developed example, conclusion driving home your position)

Tuesday (at home)
Finish your draft.

Wednesday 9/12 (in class)
Self-assessment and peer-assessment of student handbook policy argument essays


Persuasive argument essay
(using rhetoric)

What do you do after you’ve written a complete draft?

Self-Assess
  • Go back through the directions to make sure you’ve done everything.
  • Reread with the directions and rubric in mind.
    • First paragraph
    • Do you have a sentence at the beginning that grabs the reader's attention? Mark this with a "g".
    •  Do you have a sentence in the first paragraph that clearly states and/or explains the policy that you are responding to? Mark this with a "p".
    • Do you have a sentence in the first paragraph that clearly states your position on the policy (this is your claim and/or your thesis)? Mark this with a "t"
    • Body paragraphs
    • Does each body paragraph clearly state a reason that supports your position? Mark this with an "r" in each body paragraph.
    • Does each body paragraph develop an example that supports the reason? Mark this with an "e" in each body paragraph.
    • Conclusion
    • In a final paragraph do you clearly state your position (your claim, your thesis)? Mark this with another "t".
    • In the final paragraph do you remind the reader of key reasons and examples? Mark these reminders with other "r"s.
  • Proofread…again. How?
    • Reread aloud slowly using a one-foot voice.
    • Reread in reverse (sentence-by-sentence, paragraph by paragraph)
  • Reflect.
    • What are you proud of? What have you done well?
    • What would you do differently? What would you work on if you had more time?

Peer-Assess
  • Ask someone else to read & make comments in the margin about  elements from the rubric that you'd like them to comment on. 
  • At the end of the argument essay your peer assessor must also answer the question, is the essay convincing? Explain.
  • The peer editor must sign your draft. 

Wednesday (at home)
Work on final draft of your student handbook policy argument essay.

Thursday 9/13 (in class)
Begin independent reading.

Thursday (at home)
Finish final draft of your student handbook policy argument essay.

Friday 9/14 (in class)
Turn in your final draft with first draft, self/peer assessment, and prewriting.





Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Resources for Week 1 Homework

 Compass Student Handbook
 Annotate with underlining/highlighting and comments (ideas, feelings, questions) in the margin
or, take double-entry notes: information (quotations, paraphrase on the left; ideas, feelings, questions on the right).
Be prepared to use your annotations or notes in a Socratic Seminar on Friday, September 7.

Summer Reading Assignment
Due on Tuesday, September 11 in your F-block class.